Uwaaa, this is a sweet piece!
Really loving your drawing style, I can tell you knew what you were doing. Usually it's pretty tricky to do a full shot like this, but managed to execute it really nicely.
I really like the vague manga look, the minimal shading and strong black/white contrast is easy on the eyes.
That perspective too, damn. It looks a bit out of order, but that gives it a more unique and natural look, which is a good thing. Sorta like the messed up angles in Soul Eater manga, ehehe~
And I like all the background details and characters too, they really add to the picture.
Everything looks so natural and flowing, without looking too wonky and out of place at the same time.
I really love styles and pieces like these.